Hello, Friend! In this episode of Messed-Up to Set-Ups, Bassil Kamas is back in the lab! This time, we dig into something every joke writer eventually deals with: What do we do when we know there’s something funny in a premise but we just can’t seem to finish the joke? We work through several of Bassil’s bits in real time, including one about a school fire in Lodi and a wildly dark suicide-hotline premise. Along the way, we explore the gap between expectation and reality, exaggeration, escalation, and what happens when we keep pushing an idea instead of settling for the first punchline. If you’ve ever had a joke that felt like it should work but couldn’t quite figure out what it was missing, this episode gives you a front-row seat to two comedians trying to solve that exact problem. Tune in!
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